Chibi and a Dream

I need some help! I think I drew her in a bad pose. I'm not knocking this picture, I do like it. I just need some suggestions. I really am trying and believing I can draw. I know I have said some terrible shit about the way I draw for years, however; I have taken a 3 steps and have been putting in the work. I am practicing my chibi drawings. Thank you this will be appreciated.